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Join date : 2013-09-09
Age : 29
Location : Banner Elk, NC

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PostSubject: Pain of Love   Pain of Love Empty29/1/2014, 5:57 pm

This is the poem that I have posed on the previous website so this is a form of a repost. I wrote this poem sophomore year in high school for geometry class. Yes, the assignment was to write a poem for valentine's day using geometry terms.

Pain Of Love

You were a musician, I was just a simple girl.
I heard that rocking guitar chord, and I caught sight of you
in my corner view.
You had a devilish smirk, I couldn't see past it.
My heart was already in a different hemisphere than my intuition.
Then my head was up in outer space, when I looked into your face.
We both wore matching converse.
We became adjacent angles, but we were really
alternate exterior angles.
I thought you had a cool attitude, but really
your head was in its own altitude.
Then I found out your truth value.
I thought we were the perfect component form.
I reached a sad conclusion, and also I reached
a deductive reasoning you cheating jerk.
You yelled and said I had indirect proof, but
I really had a lot of proof. We were really opposite rays.
This is my final statement. I really need to get my point across.
I'm gonna go in a new direction.
I don't want to stand between you, your dreams, and that girl.
I hit a slight angle of depression after we broke up.
I saw a sad reflection in my last,
sad, crying tear. Goodbye, forever
-Nancy Lee Carden

February 2010
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